well... I don't know very well can I say you... Is my first Critique xD I think is PERFECT!! Really nice effects and shadows ^^ Brilliant.
One critique? mmmhh... I think you could be cleaner, or have better quality. But sometimes... can't, you understand me Happens to me exact same thing with my drawings, through the fault the printer... :S You could try to use Photoshop or some other program ^ ^ you will should try at least once, to make a color drawing
Sorry for my bad english, if you do not agree with something please say me
On the highlights on the fur, it should have been done the same as the rest of the shade of the fur. you just made fur give a roundness. it shouldn't be like that. its just like what you do with hair, give it more to a ripple tone. other then that, looks great. I like where you give shape to the pants and the face and your proportions are good but the chest is way too big, normally, ur chest is the same size of your head, especially the pecks. and the neck. way too big. other that that, pretty good.