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Super Gogeta

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Well.. I guess it's a re-re-draw xD I took my old one off the wall to practice inking, and now there's a space so I had to re-draw it to fill the space O.o I'm weird like that xD Imma put it on a meme I think soon. I like it, what do you guys think?
Here's the first drawing of it: [link]
And here's the second drawing: [link]
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I love this drawing you did. I know I told you that I absolutely love pencil work and, to this day, I can still say I love it even more after seeing this work.
Pros: I love detail and the shading. Omg, it is absolutely amazing. The line work, everything about it is great.
Cons: I do some of the lines where they should be a little more thicker or bolder. Like, the part of his vest that is over his right (our left) pectoral muscle is too thin for my taste and I think the collar and that part of the vest could have been asked for more attention.
Tips: I think you should find your light source, where ever you wanna put it. There should be a lot of heavy shadows underneath the vest where his diaphragm ends and his abs begin. Adding a bit of shading like that would definitely give this picture a greater impact.
Overall, I absolutely love it and it's so cool how skilled you are! Great job!!
-Laania