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Gogeta Super Saiyan 4 by Conzibar Gogeta Super Saiyan 4 by Conzibar
Okayyy a request from :iconpikachuvirus1996:
I hope you like it! I love it, especially the eyes ^_^
I put a lot of work into the shading, it felt like it took forever :p
What do you guys think?
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Greetings I am the Superrider and it is time for some epic awesomeness folks. Today we have Conzibar's latest masterpiece Gogeta Super Saiyan 4. What's good about it? Well first of all, EVERYTHING, no it's perfect. The lighting is perfect, the shading is perfect. Well, I suppose one thing that isn't so perfect is the arm to the edge of the picture, I'm not sure what's wrong with it, it just looks a bit odd to me. I think it's because it should have been drawn all the way, maybe. Overall I love this picture, I do know where this picture came from though, so, I will give this picture a 9.5/10. And I think that this is Conziber's best picture yet. Superrider14 out!
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Critique by Sephirozaine Jan 23, 2013, 9:09:28 AM
My second critique for you. Well, overall, it is pretty much well drawn. However, here are some things I should point out.

For the left arm of his, even though it is kind of cut out, I can see there is something rather strange about that part. I am assuming this is from the part where Gogeta is fighting the final boss dude in GT? Anyway, do not ever forget about the fact that SSJ4 Gogeta has bulky arms. In this artwork, Gogeta somewhat seems to have small arms. In order to draw a muscular character, you can never forget about big muscles.

And the right hand of his. I highly doubt his right hand would come out like that, considering the fact that his biceps is hidden, meaning his right arm is all the way back. The original one which this artwork is based on, makes sense for the right hand to come out like that as for the original, Gogeta's body is somewhat leaning towards the right side and there is not much space between his biceps and the right hand. But for this case, your Gogeta's body is standing straight and the way that right hand came out only makes it strange looking. For this case, the fist should be positioned somewhat lower than that. Or, the biceps should be visible somewhat. Or, the arm from the wrist should be going up, not straight.
I am not sure you get what I am saying here, but that is the best I can tell you. Just watch out for the body structure, because a simple mistake can sometimes ruin your artwork.

But yes, other than that, I don't really have much to point out. The way you did the shading here is pretty neat, and only the eyes being colored, well, even though I much prefer it being colored all the way, but only the eyes being colored is pretty interesting to look at still.

The chest is nicely done. And I can see you put a lot of efforts on the hair and pants.

I can give 8 out of 10 for this artwork. Great job, keep it up.
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Natakiro Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Another great work from you! I just love this, especially that shading and pose. Those eyes are cool, being the only thing in color. :D
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the colour in the eyes too! I couldn't get a clear picture with the camera at the time, I could probably do with getting a better one soon
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TBWSP Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yoooo dawg this is beast! :D
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah xD Thanks!
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mavericknono23 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Verry nice , congratulations :)
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ^-^
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Josh592 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013   Writer
Kickass.
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :p
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AgonizingSwordfish Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the eyes! :D
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :p
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Deathcomeslast Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sephirozaine I kind of like his idea of Gogeta , and I actually think its the right arm the wrist just needed to be a little bit skinnier but its not really noticible I also like the blue eyes overall just nice , one question did you use a pen? not that it makes a difference in the artwork just curious :)
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you like it! I couldn't figure out what it was at the time/:
Noo I never use pen, all HB pencil(:
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Deathcomeslast Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice, the lines are darkened just right thats y i asked
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I always think about using a pen for the outline but I hate the thought of messing up. It's harder to shade using pencil for the outline, but I guess it helps me improve my shading(:
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Deathcomeslast Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know right, outlines with pencil are only help ful because you can use different shades of out line with facial features and hair and what you pointed out, you can fix mistakes. Well keep it up bro good job
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lizardlaser Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ur a awesome artist!
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much!
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Kuroda-XIII Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree with the 2 critiques!

it's still nicely done though! :D
keep up the good work! :aww:
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I hope you like my latest work too!
And I shall do C:
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Daviid96 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Its so that I just wanna steal that off you and keep it xD
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha I don't think I'd let you steal it! I put a lot of work into the shading :p
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Daviid96 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
naw dang it wouldve look great on my wall haha :p
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha well tough! I like it on my wall(;
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Daviid96 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
nioooooo D: LOL you win this round :p
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe I'll always win ;D
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Daviid96 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
I'll win neeext rooound D; LOL
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You can try, good luck(;
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Biohazaard Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey there! Loving this piece! Its just so fanspastic! The shadings right on, all the lines are perfect, the shape, the dynamic....asdfghjkl! ITS JUST IMPECCABLE! :D And I love the eyes, perfect touch of colour :) Love it.
KTHXBAI
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! Heheh I'm glad you like it! ^-^
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Kozuroh Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yay its done! XD
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah! What do you think?:3
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Kozuroh Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
dude its awesome! XD
-srry fr the late reply i was sick
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No worries! Hope you feel better:3
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Kozuroh Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks! XD
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Prince-Vegeta-0011 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
That's so awesome man The one touch I really love about it is how you just colored the eyes and kept everything else in black and white shades.
It just brings out the eyes that much more
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah I like the eyes too! Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it! ^-^
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Prince-Vegeta-0011 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
No problem ^^ and yeah I actually tried to do something like this back when I first got Mortal Kombat 9 and I was gonna do a black and white shaokahn drawing with just the eyes glowing red/orange

But.... then I failed at drawing... xD
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha I don't think I could do that either xD
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Prince-Vegeta-0011 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Haha you play MK too?

and I did allright.. I just made the eyes too small lol
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've played a little and I like what I've played but never got the chance to play a lot):
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Prince-Vegeta-0011 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Aww yeah that happens to me with some games too =/

Do you have xbox live? I could add you. (im not that great at some games though xD)
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahh I don't have an Xbox, I have a PS3(: So what games do you play?
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flutter-cry Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
:faint: That looks so cool
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG! You fainted!! Are you okay?! D:
Thank you very much! C:
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flutter-cry Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
*stands up* I'm ok....:iconweeeplz: THAT PIC IS SO COOL!!!!
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:iconconzibar:
Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha thanks so much c:
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flutter-cry Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
No problem
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gokujr96 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. Came out great!
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Conzibar Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks man! Glad you like it!(:
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gokujr96 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! :D
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