Greetings I am the Superrider and it is time for some epic awesomeness folks. Today we have Conzibar's latest masterpiece Gogeta Super Saiyan 4. What's good about it? Well first of all, EVERYTHING, no it's perfect. The lighting is perfect, the shading is perfect. Well, I suppose one thing that isn't so perfect is the arm to the edge of the picture, I'm not sure what's wrong with it, it just looks a bit odd to me. I think it's because it should have been drawn all the way, maybe. Overall I love this picture, I do know where this picture came from though, so, I will give this picture a 9.5/10. And I think that this is Conziber's best picture yet. Superrider14 out!
My second critique for you. Well, overall, it is pretty much well drawn. However, here are some things I should point out.
For the left arm of his, even though it is kind of cut out, I can see there is something rather strange about that part. I am assuming this is from the part where Gogeta is fighting the final boss dude in GT? Anyway, do not ever forget about the fact that SSJ4 Gogeta has bulky arms. In this artwork, Gogeta somewhat seems to have small arms. In order to draw a muscular character, you can never forget about big muscles.
And the right hand of his. I highly doubt his right hand would come out like that, considering the fact that his biceps is hidden, meaning his right arm is all the way back. The original one which this artwork is based on, makes sense for the right hand to come out like that as for the original, Gogeta's body is somewhat leaning towards the right side and there is not much space between his biceps and the right hand. But for this case, your Gogeta's body is standing straight and the way that right hand came out only makes it strange looking. For this case, the fist should be positioned somewhat lower than that. Or, the biceps should be visible somewhat. Or, the arm from the wrist should be going up, not straight. I am not sure you get what I am saying here, but that is the best I can tell you. Just watch out for the body structure, because a simple mistake can sometimes ruin your artwork.
But yes, other than that, I don't really have much to point out. The way you did the shading here is pretty neat, and only the eyes being colored, well, even though I much prefer it being colored all the way, but only the eyes being colored is pretty interesting to look at still.
The chest is nicely done. And I can see you put a lot of efforts on the hair and pants.
I can give 8 out of 10 for this artwork. Great job, keep it up.
Sephirozaine I kind of like his idea of Gogeta , and I actually think its the right arm the wrist just needed to be a little bit skinnier but its not really noticible I also like the blue eyes overall just nice , one question did you use a pen? not that it makes a difference in the artwork just curious
I know right, outlines with pencil are only help ful because you can use different shades of out line with facial features and hair and what you pointed out, you can fix mistakes. Well keep it up bro good job
Hey there! Loving this piece! Its just so fanspastic! The shadings right on, all the lines are perfect, the shape, the dynamic....asdfghjkl! ITS JUST IMPECCABLE! And I love the eyes, perfect touch of colour Love it. KTHXBAI